This
Clumsy Living. By Bob Hicok. Pittsburgh, PA:
University of Pittsburgh Press, 2007. $14.00 (pa.)
Convenient as it may seem, I think that one thing
that sets Hicok apart as a poet is that he has some
life experience to draw from. He didn't learn how
to write by committee; he worked in the automotive
industry for twenty years before becoming a poet.
Since then, he's published four collections, received
two Pushcarts, appeared in three volumes of Best American
Poetry, and now teaches at Virginia Tech.
There is a working class sensibility in these poems—by
that I mean that Hicok knows that the biggest concerns
of many people are the necessities of life (food,
medicine, etc) but Hicok's narrators are also concerned
with the necessities of the mind. In "Green of
the Day" Hicok describes a character who has
been laid off and is job hunting: "…every
fourth thought/is why do board members at Delphi get
three hundred K/per annum to cut wages by two thirds,
why is Verizon/ dropping pensions with a profit of
seven billion/last year, picture…going to the
bank and asking for that in ones. I'm sorry,/ you're
hoping to imagine rent, what fold in time/ five hundred
and seventy dollars will appear from." Hicok
steps away from a description that could be trite
or preachy and reveals an understanding of the realities
of his audience. We are concerned with our own situations,
but there is a world beyond what's in front of us,
also, and Hicok balances these two ideas very well.
The book is organized into five sections, each identifying
a cliché: "Twenty-three Windows",
"Thirty-two dreams", etc. In the poem, "A
Letter: The Genesis Poem" Hicok points out these
familiar words that he tends to use, revealing a self-deprecating
sense of humor. He then takes words from Genesis and
re-groups them into lines, such as "And to every
bird and evening cattle let there be yielding."
It is a window, if you will, into the creative process;
these ideas and themes are, of course, not necessarily
new.
Aside from being clever and often humorous, these
poems display an emotional depth. These aren't esoteric
poems. Hicok deals with death, loss, suffering and
inhumanity on a personal level. He's grounded in the
cruelties the world can and often does inflict. In
"Waiting for my foot to ring," Hicok describes
a narrator waiting for news of his father's colon
cancer surgery: "I was told about a poet who
wrote a poem the day/his wife was put in a box and
given to the ground/like it was Christmas. The person
telling me…thought the poet was sick/and I thought
the poet had a mind that only lived/in his hands."
Even when dealing with profound situations, Hicok
doesn't devolve into trite sentimentality or emotional
blackmail, and it is in moments like this, in which
he joins the mind and heart, that he truly shines.
And there are many such moments.
-CL Bledsoe